Ok. No idea why I'm going public with this. Maybe I've grown over it. Had been writing this since past semester. Yeah, took an awful lot of time. Added stanzas whenever I pleased. This piece suffered a lot, blame my whims and fancies. And now it dies.
Flow
Myriad thoughts
Reflected in her eyes
A sardonic smile
The perfect disguise
Commanding her rationale
To dive, ponder and pause
To unearth her own being
Find out who she was
The cherub
A carefree, foamy wave
Golden under the sun
Merrily ambling away
The sensitive
A soothing, patient brook
Talks to the mind
Returns what worries took
The thinker
Serene expanse of blue
A pebble's ripples
Contemplating old and new
The ambitious
A proud, roaring waterfall
Stones, hills, rocks
Wanting to conquer them all
The sorrowed
Bare, disobedient lament
A trickle, a deluge
Unrestrained drops of sentiment
The erudite
Orb's wisdom pouring in
Ocean gleaming in the sun
Ageless, all-pervading
The destructor
The whirlpool in the sea
A twisted motive,
Engulfing all in her fury
The mellowed
Meandering to the deep ranks
Recollecting and reminiscing
The voyage between two banks
The nature
The spirit in her entirety
Rediscovering herself,
The unvarying, elemental identity
5 comments:
Random......but perhaps will yield some meaning when one ponders over it
deep.. difficult to put into perspective without further thought.
kind of like art...lolz
lets see more of these from you...
its beautiful :')
beautiful
as the neighburrrrr forced us to read her new composition in glssses, we were totally convinced tht each emotions r inspired nd fostered by her own life :D
its 1 45 at night ... nd i was here to give comments to her poem...
and here i c this composition...
awesum re.. deep thoughts woven perfectly...
awesum...
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